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Gary Fry (Gary_fry)
Username: Gary_fry

Registered: 03-2008
Posted From: 86.29.115.123
Posted on Saturday, August 28, 2010 - 03:05 pm:   

What do folk think? I'm no Hitchcock, but I had a go . . .

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l2DGqvXpFFs
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Zed (Gary_mc)
Username: Gary_mc

Registered: 03-2008
Posted From: 81.96.253.77
Posted on Saturday, August 28, 2010 - 03:55 pm:   

Well, it made me smile...for the right reasons, I might add.
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Frank (Frank)
Username: Frank

Registered: 09-2008
Posted From: 85.222.86.21
Posted on Saturday, August 28, 2010 - 04:21 pm:   

Mate, I'd take out the colour photos and put some more b & w ones in. They worked a treat. Nice little trailer.
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Mark West (Mark_west)
Username: Mark_west

Registered: 03-2008
Posted From: 86.171.253.12
Posted on Sunday, August 29, 2010 - 09:51 pm:   

Not bad at all, though I'd use a different font other than Chiller at the end.
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Ramsey Campbell (Ramsey)
Username: Ramsey

Registered: 03-2008
Posted From: 195.93.21.68
Posted on Monday, August 30, 2010 - 11:27 am:   

Hey, not bad!
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Gary Fry (Gary_fry)
Username: Gary_fry

Registered: 03-2008
Posted From: 86.29.115.123
Posted on Monday, August 30, 2010 - 11:40 am:   

Thanks. Especially since I know nowt about making films. :-)
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Kate (Kathleen)
Username: Kathleen

Registered: 09-2009
Posted From: 86.142.147.219
Posted on Monday, August 30, 2010 - 12:44 pm:   

I agree with Frank - the monochrome is weirder and more dramatic. The modern colour pics seem a little too mundane. Otherwise - great work!
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Frank (Frank)
Username: Frank

Registered: 09-2008
Posted From: 85.222.86.21
Posted on Monday, August 30, 2010 - 01:05 pm:   

Gary - I paid Kate to say that. I know nowt about putting together movies either.

Seriously, it's a good un. Richard Ebbert out
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Gary Fry (Gary_fry)
Username: Gary_fry

Registered: 03-2008
Posted From: 86.29.115.123
Posted on Monday, August 30, 2010 - 01:06 pm:   

Thanks, all. I'll work on some revisions and bung up another version asap.
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Gary Fry (Gary_fry)
Username: Gary_fry

Registered: 03-2008
Posted From: 86.29.115.123
Posted on Monday, August 30, 2010 - 02:53 pm:   

Frank, Kate, Mark, and anyone else who fancies being Barry Norman: is this better?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l2DGqvXpFFs
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Kate (Kathleen)
Username: Kathleen

Registered: 09-2009
Posted From: 86.142.147.219
Posted on Monday, August 30, 2010 - 03:12 pm:   

I think that's much better, Gary!

And Frank - I said unmarked bills. Don't make me send Lord P round to collect it for me.
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Gary Fry (Gary_fry)
Username: Gary_fry

Registered: 03-2008
Posted From: 86.29.115.123
Posted on Monday, August 30, 2010 - 03:16 pm:   

Thanks!
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Mick Curtis (Mick)
Username: Mick

Registered: 03-2008
Posted From: 86.182.156.45
Posted on Monday, August 30, 2010 - 04:06 pm:   

Very good Gary - well done. Much prefer that second version.
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Mark West (Mark_west)
Username: Mark_west

Registered: 03-2008
Posted From: 86.171.253.12
Posted on Monday, August 30, 2010 - 08:50 pm:   

I liked that version better, definitely. I don't know if I'm being too picky, but the house they "see" on the website isn't the same one that we get the newspaper headlines from.

Very good though, I liked it.
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Gary Fry (Gary_fry)
Username: Gary_fry

Registered: 03-2008
Posted From: 86.29.115.123
Posted on Monday, August 30, 2010 - 09:01 pm:   

I know that, mate, but I can't be arsed Photoshopping that level of detail. :-)
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Gary Fry (Gary_fry)
Username: Gary_fry

Registered: 03-2008
Posted From: 86.29.115.123
Posted on Monday, August 30, 2010 - 09:13 pm:   

I mean, who do you think I am? Stanley Coo Brick? Get outta here!

Sir Alfred Stopcock, me. Cecile B Demented.
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Frank (Frank)
Username: Frank

Registered: 09-2008
Posted From: 85.222.86.21
Posted on Tuesday, August 31, 2010 - 09:19 am:   

No, Michael Winner. There are similarities there, I mean in style...all you need now is an author's photo for the inside back leaf: Fry surrounded by a bevy of scantily clad women while he wields his Cuban cigar all over the show, shouting...'action me lovelies, action.'
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Thomasb (Thomasb)
Username: Thomasb

Registered: 03-2008
Posted From: 69.236.169.250
Posted on Tuesday, August 31, 2010 - 11:51 pm:   

I liked it Gary! No particular comments, though the music was appropriately creepy.
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Gary Fry (Gary_fry)
Username: Gary_fry

Registered: 03-2008
Posted From: 86.29.115.123
Posted on Wednesday, September 01, 2010 - 08:31 am:   

That was a bit of old man Liszt.
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Joel (Joel)
Username: Joel

Registered: 03-2008
Posted From: 91.110.142.143
Posted on Wednesday, September 01, 2010 - 09:08 am:   

Very nice trailer, yes. Mixing the uncanny with the challenges of, er, difficult family situations I'd like to see de Richleau cope with that one.
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Frank (Frank)
Username: Frank

Registered: 09-2008
Posted From: 85.222.86.21
Posted on Wednesday, September 01, 2010 - 10:41 am:   

Kate - Lord P never did bother coming round to collect those unmarked bills...he lost his bottle or what?
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Kate (Kathleen)
Username: Kathleen

Registered: 09-2009
Posted From: 86.142.147.219
Posted on Wednesday, September 01, 2010 - 11:29 am:   

Oh, you won't actually SEE him, Frank. But you'll definitely know he's been.
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Frank (Frank)
Username: Frank

Registered: 09-2008
Posted From: 85.222.86.21
Posted on Wednesday, September 01, 2010 - 11:38 am:   

Yes, it might the minutest, but visible particles of crushed velvet he'll leave behind, or the dead rose left on my pillow...
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Gary Fry (Gary_fry)
Username: Gary_fry

Registered: 03-2008
Posted From: 86.29.115.123
Posted on Wednesday, September 01, 2010 - 12:04 pm:   

Yes, a dead Rose. Like Billy Piper in Dr Who. A whole girl on your bed. Dead.
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Frank (Frank)
Username: Frank

Registered: 09-2008
Posted From: 85.222.86.21
Posted on Wednesday, September 01, 2010 - 12:14 pm:   

Alas, and thankfully, I did not get the Rose connection to Dr. Who. Oh, yes, I did. Her character's name was Rose...and me having never watched a single episode of Dr Who (I mean the latest batch of regenerated chaps).

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